College Essay Workshop

Stuck on Your College Essay? 6 Easy Ways to Get Started Today

Written by Rachel Morris | Feb 21, 2023 10:04:00 PM

Does your stomach get tight when you think about writing your college essay? Does your head start to swirl with worries? “What should I even write about?” “What if I don’t stand out?” “What if my essay flops and I miss my dream school?”  Putting it off for another day without writing it may feel easier. Don’t. Here’s your nudge to get going. 

Start early, start now. Here's how:

  1. Read Accepted Essays. 
  2. Reflect On Your Past Experiences. 
  3. Generate Stand-Out Ideas. 
  4. Talk It Out. 
  5. Practice Working Through One Topic.   
  6. Refine Your Writing.  

Read Accepted Essays. 

Read other students' writing to get familiar with what your future school is looking for. You’ll get a feel for what kinds of stories to tell, and understand the type of students who attend each college. Take this time to get to know your future classmates and start to study what makes their essays stand out. 

When reading, look for: 

  • Voice. How do they tell their story? Does the writing feel formal or informal? Are you interested in their story? What keeps you engaged?

  • Insight. What do you learn about the person, beyond the story they tell? What characteristics and ideas do they reveal through their writing? Can you see how the reader has grown as a person throughout the essay?

  • Perspective. Notice if the writer starts small and zooms out to broader applications, or vice versa. Does this feel natural? 

  • Craft. Does the writer use a guiding metaphor or a throughline to connect various parts of their story? 

  • Examples. What kind of stories is the writer choosing to tell? Are the topics broad and general or dialed in and specific?

Reflect On Your Past Experiences. 

Once you've seen what works, turn back to yourself. What stories from your past will reveal the real you? As the memories start flowing, take mental notes. 

  • The topics you draw on should feel true to who you are, not true to the person you think your college wants you to be. Which memories or stories feel the most impactful? 

  • What parts of yourself do you want to highlight? Which stories highlight those parts most clearly? Get specific and go deep. 

Talk It Out. 

You don’t have to conquer this essay in isolation. In fact, some of the best ideas come from conversation. Use the people around you to brainstorm topics, experiment with different framings and get feedback on your ideas. Share the stories you might write about with your parents, friends, teachers, or peers. 

Notice which ideas spark interest and which ones fall flat. Which stories light you up and flow out of you without much effort? You might dread the process of actually writing your college essay, but talking about your topic should be fun. 

Generate Stand-Out Ideas. 

You have a stand-out story to tell. The trouble is finding it. After talking through your reflections, your great ideas will be top of mind. Transfer those mental notes onto paper. Remember to choose stories that are specific, personal and true. Avoid writing the same, tired essay that admissions officers have read 100 times by going small. Brainstorm real moments from your “normal” life that have shaped you. 

  • What parts of your identity are most important to you? 

  • What memories have shaped those parts? Try not to reach for the obvious first answer. Is there a smaller, more personal moment that you could highlight?

Push through the instinct to go broad and lofty here. It’s all about highlighting your Mundane Miracle, the moment that’s true, authentic and entirely unique for you. 

Practice Working Through One Topic.   

The only way to get good is to get going. The pressure to choose just one, perfect topic can feel paralyzing. Don’t sweat. This is practice, no need to stick to this story for your final essay. So far, all the steps you have taken are like reps at the gym; you’re building up muscle that will allow you to write a compelling college essay. 

Here’s one exercise to help structure your practice:

Step 1: Write down one of your potential essay topics. (Don’t stress about being perfect – just choose!) 

Step 2: Write down two main points within your topic. Eventually, these will expand into paragraphs. 

Step 3: Write your answer to the "So What?” question. Why does this story matter to you? What came from this moment that impacted you in such a big way?

Step 4: Write a hook for your story. Think back to the conversations you’ve already had. What details made your audience smile, laugh, or lean in? How can you drop your reader into your memory?

Step 5: Read through everything you’ve written and write a “blurry thumbnail.” This doesn’t have to be polished either. Don’t get caught up in perfecting the details or adding your snazziest language, just be sure to connect your major points from beginning to end. 

Refine Your Writing. 

And now you’re off! You no longer have to stare at a blank page, with a blinking cursor mocking you. You’ve written a draft of one possible essay to use in your application. Use the momentum you’ve just created to keep going. If you’re not happy with your current draft, review your list of ideas, choose a new topic and work through step 5 again. 

If you love what you've got so far, keep writing! Once you’re happy with your draft, check out the 5 mistakes students make when writing their essays (according to admissions officers) to be sure you didn’t fall into any of the common traps!